Monday, January 14, 2008

The Lost

I stepped outside to find a subject this afternoon. Despite the blinding sun, I shivered beneath my puffy jacket, cupping my lens with dry hands. It was the scratch that ended my search.

Crisp
a scratch
fallen leaves
skip in the wind
wrinkled and scattered
alone searching for lost
tired and worn, tossing about
a scrape and a gust - one takes flight
rising and wandering without aim
waiting patiently for peace found in rest

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I discovered etheree, the poetry structure I used above, in Writer's Digest December issue - an article by Michael J. Vaughn. Each line builds in syllables - beginning with one and ending in 10. Let me know if you give it a go.

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10 comments:

PATRICIJA said...

I like it..pic and words.

Nice warm day :)

Gotta Knit! said...

There is such beauty in simplicity.

Lulu said...

Lovely picture and words. Will have to give it ago one time soon. Loving your photos of late!

ps: Stumbled upon your blog while writing my life list...which I have now posted on my blog....will add it to your list when I have some extra time!

JeSais said...

ahhhh. beautiful

d.girl said...

I will totally use this kind of poem with my students when we do our poetry unit. You are the writing master!

Tamar Orvell said...

what puffy jacket? please tell... in poetry, prose, or PHOTO...

littlepurplecow said...

puffy jacket = black down jacket, faux fur collar - the first one I grab when it's really cold outside

twowritingteachers said...

very cool poetry form -- i'm going to try it for poetry friday tomorrow. perhaps you'll submit your entry too? the round up is happening at FARM SCHOOL http://farmschoolathome.blogspot.com/ .

i've loved reading your blog ever since i found it a few months ago (i'm from inspiring readers & writers, as well as two writing teachers) -- thank you for your genuine writing. it's lovely!

Ruth

Tamar Orvell said...

thnx for puffy info. i, too, don a black puffy jacket (w real buck or suede or something scratchy as the inside liner of its mandarin collar).

LeAnne Benfield Martin said...

I like the photo and the poem. I haven't heard of etheree--I'm going to try it some time. Thanks!

LeAnne